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Hello,This is an edit work. To be short, there are 3 major things need changes as according:1. Merge 1st and 2nd paragraph into one introduction, To show strong thesis statement2. Write topic sentence and conclusion sentence for each paragraph. 3. Write the conclusion paragraph, Wrap all the contents along with thesis.In short, utilize the topic sentence of each body paragraph to directly address and support a different specific element of your thesisAnd after the major changes, adjust the paper as according:1. Use double quotation marks for direct quotations ” “2. Revise your intro and add a clearer thesis statement and outline (not at the end of the second paragraph)3. Don’t end a paragraph with a reference. You must end with a concluding sentence (in your own words).4. Check that all of your points are connected to the thesis and that all of the references have been commented on (in your own words and linked to the thesis).5 Change title to “The impact of social media on young people’.This will give your essay focus and in your thesis statement, you can state your position (negative/positive/ mix of both).Then format the paper as Harvard Referencing.Please highlight all the words you add or edit, should be over 600 words rewrite&adding.Thank you.